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Walking alone, looking at the stars.
Remembering last summer
And everything that happened.
Like two summers ago when we hung out both for the first time,
And the last for quite a while.
Because you left,
Right after I met you.
And the next time I got to see you was the following spring break
When my parents brought me to you.
I can easily remember, almost as if it were yesterday,
Almost everything that happened that week.
And then, by some miracle,
You came back.
©2009 ~yo-amo-music
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I'm not sure I really like this one. I like the idea, but not the writing, I guess.

Because someone wanted me to submit something new.

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I wonder who that someone was?

I definitley think you have potential here. I felt a lot of sorrow 'til the last two lines, and then I smiled.

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It takes courage to enjoy it!
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Someone who I've known all through high school and someone who is currently not here. Our 'anniversary,' if you want to call it that, is the 4th of July.

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-Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. Discover. -Mark Twain
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How sweet! :)

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It takes courage to enjoy it!
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Kinda....

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-Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. Discover. -Mark Twain
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Bittersweet?

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It takes courage to enjoy it!
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Yeah.

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-Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. Discover. -Mark Twain
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:(

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It takes courage to enjoy it!
:iconyo-amo-music:
But it's alright.

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-Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. Discover. -Mark Twain
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A pleasant memory, perhaps?

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It takes courage to enjoy it!

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